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Truth: Someday, some boy will come and ask me for your hand
Tears painted my cheeks with rediscovered disillusionment as I listened to the song my dad had chosen for our Father-Daughter dance at my future wedding. An innocent onlooker, upon seeing me, might have smiled and wistfully sighed at the sight of my tears, mistaking them for tears of joy, but that couldn't have been farther from the truth: each word pierced my skin like the corners of my oversized diamond, reopening wounds and creating scars I was trying to ignore but could never forget.
Lie: But I won't say "yes" to him unless I know
As my first serious boyfriend, when he proposed five months into our relationship and a month before my eighteenth birthday, I thought he was the fairytale ending I'd wanted my entire life. When I called my parents that night to deliver the news, they were speechless. It was only after I assured them that, of course, we were going to wait until after college to actually get married that they found their voices to congratulate us. My father, always the quiet, pensive type, wished us well, although I'm sure he had his doubts.
Lie: He's the half that makes you whole, he has a poet's soul, and the heart of a man's man
After we had reached our one-year mark, my father wasn't the only one who had doubts, but, like my father, I actively ignored any feelings of discontent or unhappiness, never outwardly questioning the merit of our relationship. I was engaged, after all, and wasn't that every girl's dream? And, more importantly, what if the problem was myself, and he was the best I was going to get? I'd never been a gambler, and I couldn't bring myself to discard a three to take a chance on an ace if there was the slightest possibility I could end up with a deuce.
Truth: I know he'll say that he's in love
The I-love-yous became mechanical and routine, and while the signs were everywhere, I felt I was too late. What good was a "Caution" sign when I had already crashed?
Truth: But between you and me, he won't be good enough
Less than a year after sobbing over the lines of lies my father and I were supposed to dance to at my wedding, I realized that he wasn't good enough and left with little explanation (for none was really needed at that point).
I reflected back on my fear of being able to look my father in the eye during that song, both of us knowing the lies that littered each line: dirty secrets exchanged wordlessly.
Because he would have let me marry him. He would have done it because he thought that it was what I wanted, that it was what would make me happy. I love him and I hate him for that. I love him because he always let me find my own way and supported me in every pursuit, however crazy or irrational it was. But some days, I was silently screaming, begging for him to give me an excuse – any excuse – to bail. In all honesty, though, I'm not sure if I would have listened if he had tried.
Almost three years have passed since I've had the daunting task of lying to myself about being happy. Lying to yourself is pretty difficult work: work I don't care to do ever again.
But the tables have completely turned, as they say. There's no ring on my finger, but there's a sparkle in my eye and love in my heart and this beautiful song on the radio about a father giving away his daughter at her wedding. The father believes that the groom will never be good enough, but I'm finally sure about one thing:
Truth: This time, he is.
Tears painted my cheeks with rediscovered disillusionment as I listened to the song my dad had chosen for our Father-Daughter dance at my future wedding. An innocent onlooker, upon seeing me, might have smiled and wistfully sighed at the sight of my tears, mistaking them for tears of joy, but that couldn't have been farther from the truth: each word pierced my skin like the corners of my oversized diamond, reopening wounds and creating scars I was trying to ignore but could never forget.
Lie: But I won't say "yes" to him unless I know
As my first serious boyfriend, when he proposed five months into our relationship and a month before my eighteenth birthday, I thought he was the fairytale ending I'd wanted my entire life. When I called my parents that night to deliver the news, they were speechless. It was only after I assured them that, of course, we were going to wait until after college to actually get married that they found their voices to congratulate us. My father, always the quiet, pensive type, wished us well, although I'm sure he had his doubts.
Lie: He's the half that makes you whole, he has a poet's soul, and the heart of a man's man
After we had reached our one-year mark, my father wasn't the only one who had doubts, but, like my father, I actively ignored any feelings of discontent or unhappiness, never outwardly questioning the merit of our relationship. I was engaged, after all, and wasn't that every girl's dream? And, more importantly, what if the problem was myself, and he was the best I was going to get? I'd never been a gambler, and I couldn't bring myself to discard a three to take a chance on an ace if there was the slightest possibility I could end up with a deuce.
Truth: I know he'll say that he's in love
The I-love-yous became mechanical and routine, and while the signs were everywhere, I felt I was too late. What good was a "Caution" sign when I had already crashed?
Truth: But between you and me, he won't be good enough
Less than a year after sobbing over the lines of lies my father and I were supposed to dance to at my wedding, I realized that he wasn't good enough and left with little explanation (for none was really needed at that point).
I reflected back on my fear of being able to look my father in the eye during that song, both of us knowing the lies that littered each line: dirty secrets exchanged wordlessly.
Because he would have let me marry him. He would have done it because he thought that it was what I wanted, that it was what would make me happy. I love him and I hate him for that. I love him because he always let me find my own way and supported me in every pursuit, however crazy or irrational it was. But some days, I was silently screaming, begging for him to give me an excuse – any excuse – to bail. In all honesty, though, I'm not sure if I would have listened if he had tried.
Almost three years have passed since I've had the daunting task of lying to myself about being happy. Lying to yourself is pretty difficult work: work I don't care to do ever again.
But the tables have completely turned, as they say. There's no ring on my finger, but there's a sparkle in my eye and love in my heart and this beautiful song on the radio about a father giving away his daughter at her wedding. The father believes that the groom will never be good enough, but I'm finally sure about one thing:
Truth: This time, he is.
Literature
to my former self -
i.
in a dim and exhausted new york subway train - i
surrender my fingerprints over to dirty railings and
start over.
ii.
my body stretches like a mayan temple over his landscape.
my sun drags itself across his skies to his brutal moon
prowling the outskirts of our madness. he says
bend yourself to these sights, love.
recognize, but never accept.
i want your filthy and bruised hope
on my table. he was
saturating space, says - how much
do you love your world. eyes screaming
alive over and over again. you can do better
he says, but you want to do worse.
iii.
a giraffe crawls out of my dead skin and is silent,
but stares with fa
Literature
You, Me, and the Fireflies
There's a stable that holds consistency and horses
and men who don't know the difference.
There are fireflies- nature's dusk, flashlights,
and men who put them in jars.
Like how they think every person is a star.
We are not stars. We are people.
Do not mistake us for being brighter than we are.
Don't put light on our faces and say "look how bright she shines!"
Shining does not make a creature divine.
We are made in the image of who?
So why do we personify the things we are not.
Stars get names.
Babies get names.
Take the sky for what she is, and she will take you for what you are.
How would the world be if winter storms said,
"
Literature
53
at Delphi
I ask
her name
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My assignment this week for my writing group was to write a memoir about something uplifting.
*Song lyrics are from "My Little Girl," by Tim McGraw
*Song lyrics are from "My Little Girl," by Tim McGraw
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aw, I like it (: Great work!